I'm fan of cultivation novel, this is one of the good so far I've read. The story has so much potential. Currently I'm at chap.150 and I wanted give few advice if author don't mind .1. I noticed you skipping 90% of fight just by announcing the result. IMO it'll be more entertaining if add how he defeated hus opponent or how he was defeated in a fight.2. In important fights even try to the give description of the technique, stance how the weapon look like etc3. Add more detail while describing character because it help us imagine the in head. Like what their height how their figure ( silm, skiny, well bulit etc) how the look like, what they're waring etc.4. If you can then give us a auxiliary chapter regarding details of cultivation realm, like the name of the initial level, grades of alchemist and formation master, also level of the alchemy item (Pill, Potion), array level, weapon grade etc.
the mc is "bratty" and have "denial" issue. he said he read many manga and novel(?) but.....I can't do review. so I'll stop now..........review at chapter 29
I adore this writing and the character development is great. I get anxious when I've finished the published work and have to wait for the next chapter!
I’ve actually just started to read this book and all I could say is i’m loving it so far. This book gives me a mysterious yet exciting vibe to it. I’m very excited to keep reading it so keep up the good work writer!
Oh likey very much 🤗🤗🤗 Seems to be a very interesting story! The summary makes the story looks to be a great read and a great novel. I will read this story for sure. High rating is what I’ll give it for now😉😜Keep the story coming.
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