The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.
A true gem that makes me recall the good old days where webnovel had good stories. I read 56 chapters so far and both the MC and his foes are actually smart rational people. The first major antagonist alone crafted a plot I did not see coming till the last minute and i had to admit was actually really smart and creative. The MC while being smart and hiding his identity still portrayed the pride of being a powerhouse and legend without being mindlessly arrogant like other novels.TL DRWorld building is done well and characters are interesting. No obvious plotholes so far and good translation quality.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND UPDATE IT REGULARLY.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i got a little over 200 chapters in before it was just to boring. there is no story, mc just sits around and sometimes does alchemy or makes food. maybe a conversation here or there. but besides that nothing happens. it is like reading the story of a snail. if there was more action or scheming or something it would be so much better. the mc just doesn't do a single thing for hundreds of chapters.
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