This novel is absolutely incredible. The depth of the world building makes it seem like a historical event. Every character has a brain and doesn't think like a plebian. The character also has to work for opportunities
I loveee action and magic stories.🎃it gives me peace🕊️ like I am in their world.......Author has done great work hope she / he get more fame❤️u200d🩹❤️u200d🩹 keep it up......It's an amazing book!!!!! 😍❤️
👌 the first chapter is 🔥🔥🔥🔥💯 that drunken s*x amnesia hit DIFFERENT. The grammar is delicious. I ain't seen one mistake so far. muy bien! Also I'm kinda simping for lily😌😏
It's been days since I started reading this novel, I still have a few more chapters to go. It was a fun read.Writing quality: There's a few grammatical errors, some lacks punctuations and capitalizations. I was confused on who was saying some lines in the dialogues. After the author fixed these, it will be a smooth read for the readers. Need some editing for the scenes to flow naturally.Character design: It's difficult for me to remember all the characters. But, I like their strengths. Marceus' power is cool! World background: I want more background of their world, for me to fully connect to the novel.Story development: A bit fast for me, eh? Need some breather scenes. Lol.Stability of updating: You have wrote a lot of chapters, great job!Best of luck, author!
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I looked towards [Perfumed Protector] who is now biting her lips, It seemed that Aphrodite was telling the truth. [Perfumed Protector] Then looked towards me with a tear she seemed to be fighting back.
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