Unsealing: Omnipotent Father

Hello everyone, Author here,~
-As some of the people here, I have already made a few other novels other than this one.
-I accept criticism, but please do so with quality, not because you guys hate my novel.
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I Appreciate it especially for those people that would do so~ not because of writing quality, I will get 1star... That is something I hate the most~ I just wish that I would at least hear what it is that makes my story, a 1 star one!

Forgive me if there any mistakes in the review, I'm typing this out on my phone.

It appears that the author does not accept constructive criticism?

I read until chapter 20; while many others only read a few chapters before reviewing, so I hope you do not attack me for reading only '20' chapters when reviewing.

The grammar is subpar, to say the least, but the flow of the story is somewhat understandable and I can vaguely comprehend the general direction of the plot. Furthermore, the characters are like cut out cardboard figures with no real personality; it appears that they exist only to push the plot forward.  Writing about a 'billion-year old master' is difficult, to say the least, when reading you somewhat expect for the MC to know of a limitless abundance of skills yet this not shown very well.

Are we supposed to expect for the MC to have only been sleeping for most of those years? To even try to believe that is extremely unrealistic and requires a very broad mind from the readers.

For a person who is writing to make money, the quality is honestly not high enough. I've read many other originals on the site which have far less publicity than this, yet those stories have a more defined plot and much better grammar/flow.

So, I'll try to give my review according to the general system of WN.

Writing Quality: 2.5, although the writing/grammar leaves something to be desired; it is somewhat understandable.

Stability Of Updates: 5, the updates have been punctual as far as I can see. (Although I'm not sure if the quality has dropped over time as I stopped at C20.)

Character Design: This is honestly a 1-1.5 for me, the idea of a 'billion-year-old' master is extremely badly portrayed. My personal feedback is this: Don't bite off more than you can chew, for your type of novel, the MC being designed as a legendary 50-100-year-old genius that once reached the peak would have been much better. Why? This leaves room for error, as it is extremely unbelievable for a billion-year-old monster to know such limited information. Furthermore, the way the MC acts is far too unbefitting of someone that ancient. But if the MC was only 50-100 years old which is still considered an elder in human terms, it allows us to actually have leeway in our mind to believe that the MC is human and can make mistakes; even though he was at the VERY PEAK of the ENTIRE universe in his last life. The side characters that I've seen up to C20 are also extremely plain, they exist solely for the readers to have a 'funny' and 'unreasonable' read when one is drunk and not thinking straight. This is fine for some, but not for me.  

Story Development: As I've said before, extremely plain where the chapters are spewed out only to be 'there' yet with no essential plot or meaning. 2-2.5.

World Background: Although it's not fantastic, there is still a vague world I can picture while reading up to C20. - 2/5

Overall, this novel was extremely dull and boring to me which disappointed me greatly due to the number of 5-star-reviews, which made me feel a need to review this novel myself so as to balance it out.  This novel's idea even though not crafted very well may appeal to some but not me. (I may have an higher expectation than your average reader which could be because I've been spoiled from the number of good novels — which naturally also includes originals, where the grammar is much better than this story and they also have very well-thought-out plot but have a lower rating/less popularity than this story.

This was just my 2 cents on this novel. (I primarily created this since the large number of 5-star reviews did not match the content I expected)

This story is one of the best original story
Because first of all it is a true original story without so much used tropes or cliché and is a story with actual background developpement in a world that we can understand even if there is still much mysterie about it at the time i am writing this review xD
The character are not idiot and we can undersrand their train of thought even if we don't agree with it
Some twist are so new that you don't even expect it like in the chapter 36 I will not spoil it but you will be surprised

one of the best novels that i ever read ... Almost everything is perfect

I LIKE IT!!! I've just read it for 2 hours and damn I can't get enough..
I'll be watching it now an addition to my treasure trove..
I hope there is more hahaha

interesting so far, but author pay to much atention to the comments up to the point of skipping chapter in a rant, so is to inmature, is very consistent with his relases, there is more need of world background, but is undestable as the history is in his beginings.

It started decent. Maybe a little funny in the way the reincarnation happens. I didn't think it was truly great, but it was enjoyable. Then the main char started using abilities he should have no way of using. Main chars started dying and getting resurrected by even more op people. Getting thrown to other dimensions randomly... Splits of the MCs soul getting born... Over all it became weird, wtf, and cringey in the way everything happened just because the author said so. Beyond even excessive plot armor. Too much...

It started good though :/

Aaahh, finaly, i think this novel, Daedalus, and The Mech Touch are what makes Webnovel original novels the best new writer ones out there in the internet, there has been some jewels on RRL, but now it's time has passed, and there this new generation writers that are so amazing. Allright here's come my review.

First off right on the bat, we get a nice prologue setup, that get us into the mood wanting to know more. The characters are getting fleshed out, somes not that much, it's the beginning of the novel, and there's tons of new characters, but what is really nice here, is you won't get one dimensional people in any point of the story. And that is great, there's tons of leads for many possible "main plots/sublots?".
Well there's room for many things amazing things, as said, there's second role characters or even tird wheels, that feels like they want to "breaths" more into this story, giving it even mroe depths than it has at the moment.

This leads to a conclusion where you got a badass MC, that use it's heads to use what he gots efficiently, without being a pushover nor a big studs rampaging everywhere, plus we got hints that his top aint it in the Universe, so as i said, it leads to a lot of promising futures.

Dig into it! You won't be disapointed! Ah! and the Author is jsut so dedicated to this sotry, he works from 5 to 6, got family life with a new baby, writing this novel from 8 to 12pm, i mean come on, theres a patreon up, we all can share some loves to him as he does to us. BIG UP!