Hey shameless author here, I hope you are enjoying the story so far and I sincerely apologize if you come across any error in my writing. thanks for your understanding......
I am actually really impressed by this story. Your style inspires me actually even though it is kinda hard hard writing in the tense you use, but you managed to nail that so points for that. There is a few grammatical errors, but only picky people would comment on that since your style and events cover all that ish up. Keep going, I love this, and you a great author! Also I am waiting for more to come!!
Great book, have had a fun time reading it so far. Hope that it gains traction soon as it so much better than soooo many novels that are getting so much attention but are poorly written/executed.
The setting seems interesting and it has potential but needs serious editing. There are lots of grammar mistakes and unnecessarily long sentences here and there.
An interesting book, really really loved the chapters , didn't read much but the chapters that I went through so far were exciting to read. highly recommend this book keep it up .And to the readers please support this book[img=recommend]
First thing is that I love the name Jason, other than that the story is overall very good, I enjoyed the first few chapters. if you have sone free time I recommend this story very highly.
I read the first 10 chapters and can I just say that I want to adopt Hannah as my little sister. She is just the cutest thing ever. I also like Jason and the fact that he is willing to enter a tournament which could potentilally harm him just so he can provide for his mother and sister. I find that really selfless and admirable. The writing quality could use a bit of work as there are some errors here and there, but not so much that it affects the story. Overall, great writing style, pace, and characters. Keep up the good work!
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