I love the book and I enjoyed the character development quite a bit. I also enjoyed the different aspects that went in to making it. I do hope that there is more to follow.
I have only read 31 chapters right now.Writing quality is a 4 for meUpdate stability a 5 for one chap per dayFor me, the synopsis does help with future events but the problem here is that the synopsis spoils too much of what happens. The author could just say she and not mention who those people are. Why? Because there are characters that fit the description of the lady and they are not even a player. Just from the 31 chapters I read, some groups fit the description of the betrayal (the black wings who torture him)and if the synopsis was vague on what group is going to betray him then it can create suspense. 5 for how the story is developing but 1 for the synopsis. And for me the synopsis affects the story development so it is a 3 star for Story Development.I like the characters except for the black wings for me they are annoying. I don't get why there are people who hate the mc at the start(tbh the guy who rated this story 5 stars was the one whi complained) since it is reasonable he acts that way. Although he was, personally for me, too slow. So 3 starsI like how they don't give too much of the background at the start(looks at stuck as a dungeon mob who dedicated the entire 3rd chapter for world-building in the perspective of a guy who dies in chapter 5). For me 5 stars
Hello, two years have passed, due to things in life I left my work unfinished, I had good bad moments during this time like anyone else, but I really don't want to leave my work half done, that's why I took the original material, reviewed it as soon as possible. I corrected it as well as changing some plot holes in order to have a better version, I hope that the new readers, as well as the old ones who had read it before, enjoy it.
putting aside that it's already being translated, i have read it to the latest chapters in the raws and it was really good at the start but become quite a hassle to read afterwards, he become arrogant ( which is as expected of a Chinese Wn ). He dosen't even use any of tge skills he obtained!!.at the latest chapters in raw is just him punching through things and trying to act cool by being apathetic.
Bro I swear I came here just for one more review exchange, but when I read the synopsis, I already thought "my kind of novel" and when I read the first chapter, my God, I only stopped when I had no more.The story, the way of writing, the world plot all incredible, only what kills is to have few chapters.
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