Read this on scribblehub, titled as Unfathomable Senior. The MC is none at all "unfathomable" and only relates to the title ever so often when the author decides to mention that the surrounding pedestrians are so shocked every 10 chapters. The main storyline doesn't actually begin until chapter 30-40 when he finally decides to leave the beginner village to look for his family. So if you don't like 30 chapters of filler and repetitive plot, don't read this.
It’s not your typical cultivation novel were the mc because a cold blooded killer by chapter 2. And the mc actually has development. I would recommend it to anyone looking for something new.
It's a very well written story so far. The writing quality is excellent for someone who's first language isn't English.
The stability of updates seem to be good from the dates posted on the chapters, only time will tell though.
The story development so far is interesting, definitely very catching as your first read it simply because the character seems more down to earth and isn't straight up gung-ho as other stories of this nature seem to be when things first starts. Hopefully the character will adapt to the world yet still retain his core values from earth and possibly even try to integrate these values into the world over time, instead of just saying **** it and giving in to the regular values of the cultivation world and simply abandoning the values of a modern day earth.
The character design could use some more in depth personality description and history, such as flashbacks to memories that help to shape him to be the person he is and show much more accurately why he makes decisions the way he does.
The world background is pretty much ok,but it presents the opportunity for much more complex world building as the story progresses as the character himself knows very little of the world he is so far.
Overall, the story is well written, has seemingly stable updates; quality story development; character design that,while could use some improvement , is presently pretty good,and world background that has enough room for it to be developed and designed so as to be complex and very interesting.
Hopefully, the author takes a route where the character would try to integrate modern earth values through perhaps a seemingly quirky yet solid character that strives to, while not being a bleeding heart hero like superman or all might, improve the world in a realistic yet simple thought process, such as the 'pay it forward' philosophy where one kind act can repaid by paying it forward to another unfortunate individual as well as implementing a modern day earth practices such as basic education institutions like primary schools, secondary schools, tertiary schools and universities in a effort to unite people under a single banner rather than fractured into different clans and sects that hoard knowledge like a miser hoards money. Just a thought, otherwise do you author and let the haters go **** themselves.
it’s called character development give it time and he will change this makes the story more enjoying to read rather then have an op mc with an op system and is a super giga ultra instinct chad with intellect and cunning that make all the worlds smartest and most political politicians look like retard
MC IS A COWARD, STUPID AND A SHUT -IN NERD. THE STORY DEVELOPMENT IS TOO SLOW I MEAN LITERALLY AFTER HE TRANSMIGRATES THE FIRST THING HE DOES IS TRYING TO RUN EVEN THOUGH HE CLEARLY KNOWS THAT HE IS IN A FAIRLY OVERPOWERED BODY AND THAT RABBIT DEMON IS 2 WHOLE LEVELS LOW IN COMPARISON BUT NOOOOO HE STILL TRIES TO RUN BUT I READ IT SOMEHOW TILL 55+ CHAPTERS AND IT WAS STARTING TO GET BETTER BUT MC WHO REALLY DOESNT KNOW HOW THE CULTIVATION WORLD WORKS ACCEPTED DISCIPLES AND NOT EVEN TRYING THAT ZEALOUS MAKING TECHNIQUES BECAUSE THERE IS STILL DAMN 30% CHANCE THAT THEY MIGHT BETRAY YOU BUT NOOOOOOO YOU HAD TO LEAVE THEM BE GIVE HIM YOUR EXCLUSIVE LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE. AUTHOR:YOU SHOULD ATLEAST TRY TO LEVEL HIS CULTIVATION TO 2 LEVELS HIGHER BEFOR GIVING HIM DISCIPLES AND YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GIVEN HIM HIS LIGHTNING TECHNIQUE BECAUSE PERSONALLY I THINK MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE A KIND OF UNIQUENESS TO THEIR POWERS. THATS ALL
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It's a very well written story so far. The writing quality is excellent for someone who's first language isn't English.
The stability of updates seem to be good from the dates posted on the chapters, only time will tell though.
The story development so far is interesting, definitely very catching as your first read it simply because the character seems more down to earth and isn't straight up gung-ho as other stories of this nature seem to be when things first starts. Hopefully the character will adapt to the world yet still retain his core values from earth and possibly even try to integrate these values into the world over time, instead of just saying **** it and giving in to the regular values of the cultivation world and simply abandoning the values of a modern day earth.
The character design could use some more in depth personality description and history, such as flashbacks to memories that help to shape him to be the person he is and show much more accurately why he makes decisions the way he does.
The world background is pretty much ok,but it presents the opportunity for much more complex world building as the story progresses as the character himself knows very little of the world he is so far.
Overall, the story is well written, has seemingly stable updates; quality story development; character design that,while could use some improvement , is presently pretty good,and world background that has enough room for it to be developed and designed so as to be complex and very interesting.
Hopefully, the author takes a route where the character would try to integrate modern earth values through perhaps a seemingly quirky yet solid character that strives to, while not being a bleeding heart hero like superman or all might, improve the world in a realistic yet simple thought process, such as the 'pay it forward' philosophy where one kind act can repaid by paying it forward to another unfortunate individual as well as implementing a modern day earth practices such as basic education institutions like primary schools, secondary schools, tertiary schools and universities in a effort to unite people under a single banner rather than fractured into different clans and sects that hoard knowledge like a miser hoards money. Just a thought, otherwise do you author and let the haters go **** themselves.
THANK YOU.
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