Gotta say not what I expected, I expected a kingdom building like RTW, but instead of trying to immerse the reader in this world, he keeps giving his opinion and history lessons, nearly 50% of it is this stuff, the actual story or plot is not immersive and author keeps monologuing and yet uses various rare units of measures to make it 'immersive'. Apparently mc has a system, but what it does, what it is, there is no explanation, mc just knows how to use the system(this part he doesn't monolog), I have not read a lot, so just a heads up.
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This was the First Online novel I ever read, I would highly recommend it! The MC gets a Grandpa in a ring, becomes a Magus and a warrior at the same time and then proceeds to become the 2nd most OP person in the entirety of existence!
"I have source Summer. I won't be the king of the vampire world and the president of the human world for nothing." Sabi niya na parang nababasa niya ang aking isipan.
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