Im being very lenient with the rating right now, but the story itself is funny, interesting, a bit bad, and very enjoyable. You should really continue it, I see lots of potential..........
Here's the thing1. The story isnt as intimidating as the book title 🤷🏻u200d♀️, he's just going on the simple route that the majority does. The MC isnt even qualify to call himself a villain. And its hard to get attach to him like what you usually have for other great MC's.2. For a vengeful regressor like him, he cant even control his own fate and all he does is basically what the system suggest or else he'll mess up greatly or be punished by heavens for some reasons 😒3. System is basically useless, he could get stronger without the system and without following the system 🤷🏻u200d♀️
Is this the same tmw as the one on wuxia world?What happened?.............................................................................................................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
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Well... Although the idea is ok, the quality is not very good. First, typos, grammar errors and such. Not too many, but still more than should be. Author, please, at least use Grammarly (I think that's how add-on is called) to check before posting.Secondly, and this is most important. The story is just sketch. Little to no descriptions, little immersion, little to nothing on characters, they just feel blank, lacking details, thoughts or feelings. This is why they so forgettable.Conclusion: I don't recommend it. It's not that bad that you can not read, but it just doesn't worth it at the moment. Hopefully, things would change, but maybe not.
Very good story, really impressed by the way you explained things. I was really impressed by your writing and absolutely want future updates of this work.
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