yo its the author, since this is gaining some traction i apologize for any plot holes or sloppy writing, the first arc and a half i didnt plan out at all and wrote them off the top of my head, but if for some reason you're enjoying the story thanks
Badly written what more can I say. MC is 2 dimensional, it's just pwp. And this 140character limit is the reason everyone has high reviews. What more do I have to write FFS.
Everyone is hating all of the sudden. This novel is not that bad. Give it a read. Its funny and I rarely see a novel these days that can make me laugh or smile.
Gotta say I loved this story. Between world design and character design, Sixth really did a wonderful job setting an entertaining stage to tell a great story.If there's any complaint... its the last ten chapters or so. It becomes rather obvious that the author's desire to tell their story had diminished. To say the ending is rushed is like saying a bullet train is fast.Altogether the story is wonderful, its just that when it comes time to face the Nerven Race, the Ascended and the Sin of Pride... the earlier storytelling is thrown out the window. Each conclusion is a single chapter that equates to the mc wants X to happen and it does... cause the super strong enemies he faces early on are all wet tissue paper at the end.And not cause Reylin grew stronger... he just instantly has what he needs cause the story needed to end.Still a rushed ending doesn't spoil the read, so give it a go and when Reylin rescues his second earth concubine take that as the conclusion rather than the tripe that follows.
This fanfic is so good. It complete the story left by the original one perfectly. I hope that it will become the official epilogue of the king avatar novel
I like this novel more than the "beginning after the end " for the sole fact that the mc is not totally powerless when crisis strikes the overall quality is good but it would be even better if there was more romance involved
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