10/10 sports novel, well balanced system in realistic terms, characters are well potrayed MC is blunt and to the point with high IQ and low EQ female love interest is good and it doesn’t affect the story and his obsession for improving at Basketball, system gives rewards and demerits, and social life is well thought out and makes for a comfortable read, the conversations flow.P.S. cant wait for 700+ chapters like Hitting Zone so I can compare and contrast but currently even with only 200 chapters so far I think this was more enjoyable to read
Racist and repetitive novel. MC is a borderline rapist, and starting a couple hundred chapters in the author keeps inserting a racist and nationalistic China first everyplace else second ideology. Foreign or non-asian characters are only introduced as enemies and in extremely racist ways.Additionally the MC's "romances" with several of the heroines essentially amounts to repeated attempted rapes, groping women who are asleep, etc... Overall despite a pretty good start the author is scum and it leaks into this novel.
I really enjoy this novel, it's one of my newest novels in my Library but it's become a solid novel that I actually look forward to reading. Sometimes there are some strange mistakes in some of the chapters, where blanks sometimes show up. But it doesn't bother the entire story all that much.[4.6 because I enjoy this, but it's not exactly perfect all the time.]
Probably one of the best books on webnovel. I have love this book and its way of makeing the mc. I hope the author dosnt drop this book like purple lightning Emperor.
Greetings, all! This is my first time writing a novel that will contain many R18 "sessions". CAUTION: you can still turn back now if you're underage... cuz this'll make your hormones spike up. That said, I'm still getting used to writing these stuff so you may find many elements that are similar to other R18 novels. But! As we continue, the chapters will have less elements from other R18 novels. Thanks for your support! Vote, pls! Criticize pls, otherwise I will not improve! Review pls!
2-dimensional characters, but the MC at least isn't a horn dog (at least not more than a certain degree, still acceptable). Other characters are fine but not too great. Story: Slice of life, OP, lazy MC tries not to get involved in saving the world but probably ends up saving it anyway.Nice World Background (typical Fantasy World), good Writing Quality.
I don't what you have edited and not... but I see there is no more requirements to rewrite the first seven chapters. It simply keeps people hooked and have suspense, thing I liked the most is that the gaming dump wasn't included in first few chapters. Like it's annoying but your story is vivid and full of emotions. I have a lot to learn...keep up!
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