Ultimate Support

" Be considerate brother, it's like we were with other people"

So far, the story has a great start and I enjoy the characters, even if I would like some more messing around. But regardless, a great story.

The action is absolutely there, I'm Loving it, and the character names are absolutely beautiful, Phineas reminds me of Phineas from Phineas and Ferb, it'sunkown if this is authors idea or not but I love that touch to the novel, thanks for the read Author San

I really enjoyed the world-building and the unique concept of your story. The way you introduced the characters made them feel real and engaging, and the pacing kept me hooked. However, there were moments where the exposition felt a bit heavy, slowing down the momentum. Some parts could benefit from more natural dialogue to enhance the flow. Overall, it’s a great read with a lot of potential—I’m excited to see how the story develops!