sungguh Budi malu terlihat dari wajahnya seperti tomat Merah. walaupun tidak bisa silat dan tingkah lakunya sangat manja, tapi Budi sudah dari kecil melihat gerakan silat dari kakeknya.
I just started reading... and then, I found out I can't extract myself from the novel. I am more interested on how her journey will go. All those spaceships stuff is to my liking. So, we are moving. Take me onboard.
Some of the chapters are hard to read.. Just a little bit better than machine translations..Well I dont mind the author asking the readers for grammatical help, but If you want to win that spirity award or what the hell that award is.You need a proofreader and editor..This Novel is good.. I'll just come back when everything is fixed.. Work harder Author-san..If someone wants to know what I feel as I read through the chapters.. Listen to DUALITY..Sigh* I would've loved this novel right now, but-Sigh*
I absolutely love the world-building, the depth of the characters, the perfect pacing, and the engaging dialogue—it all weaves together into an unforgettable experience!
It's a good example of how to develop a system novel. The writer did a good job with opening and throughing the mc right into the action but also adding meaning to it. The way the world was explained was logical and made sense, and it wasn't overwhelming it was simple and to the point. Great story overall and ill be adding it to my library's
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