If you stop writing this novel, I'll come and find you and torture you till you start writing again, do you hear me? lol, just kidding, the story is good and I like it, don't drop it.
It's a hidden gem! I really don't understand how this story doesn't get more exposure but i believe that if the author continues, this story will gain a lot more attention.
The mc background is decent, very knowledgeable army engineer with photographic memory reincarnating in the medieval era germany. This covers a lot of things like the inventions the mc will introduce to this parallel eart. Then plot armors all over the place. Deaf and blind castle servants, non existent bodyguards and castle guards, very trusty peasants, superspeed inventing and creation of steel products, etc. It was hilarious reading his surprise when he was informed that his concubine was pregnant, what do you expect when you do it every night. Reading about mc so smart and brilliant almost every chapter then he does the stupidiest of things. Needs a lot of improvement in plot building and character development. It would have been nice reading more detail about how he teaches recipes, invention building, army buildup and territory development.
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decent read, bit too much of a wish fulfilment, MC having photographic memory and interest in war and techcnology is a big enough advantage, yet every ally he met is competent while every enemies feel incompetent just make this bit too smooth sailing, would be nicer if character arent too one-dimensional...
overall nice read for a kingdom building story but far too fast and easy for my taste
Concept is great, but hate characters. MC is "smart" but almost every action he takes is stupid. "Sigma mentality i dont need women and i focus on work " quickly turn to" i drink only bear, i dont get enough sleep and i f every chapter while having loli as his future wife". Things are also done impossibly quickly.
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overall nice read for a kingdom building story but far too fast and easy for my taste