Love the author! This book has so many mind blowing strategy game by the main character' mercenary group's leader! Sad note: I voted for the wrong novel by accident with the same name earlier today... ππ€¦u200dβοΈ webnovel should at least place a list of books in the search boxes π€¨
you can read it on mtlnovel "protect our patriarch"πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Good book and good selection of characters. I am not a big fan of the systems novels but this... seems intriguing to me for some reasons... Keep up the work, Author!
honestly i dont like kyle much but it doesnt focus on him too much which i do like also the plenty of perspectives is really cool pretty rare to see it so you get everyones perspective which i really like honestly i just hope this novel doesnt get abandoned like many others because its pretty good
I've been stuck on this book's early chapters for a quite long time already. And i think now is the time for us to part ways.The pros :- The mc's backstory is unknown yet he is likeable and understandable on a certain level.- The world is original.- Some might like the rather slow pace .- The mc's reaction to his reincarnation is really realistic .- A promising plot slowly unravels .- The author 's writing quality is above average( the style is not very eye-catching but it manages to keep you intrigued and there aren't many mistakes ( if any) ).- I don't know the chapters' lenght , but i can tell it must be longer than your average 1000 words on webnovel.The cons : - The characters are bland.The Mc is likeable yet somehow , he is uninteresting enough. If i'm being honest , i simply don't care enough about him , even though i know him( i've read 23 chapters already).I think this comes from two facts :First , the Mc doesn't really have any flaw he should work on( egoism , dishonesty...).Him being insecure makes me empathize with him but that's all. I do not feel really tied to him , nor does he seems realistic , since he has no bad side.And second , the mc's personality is melancholic and cold.Contrary to what people think , writing about a cold mc is really difficult , since it's hard to make him engaging. But not only did the author make him cold , he/she also used an omniscient pov , which further distances readers from the Mc. If only he had funny thoughts despite having a cold demeanor, it would have still been fine.But as i said earlier , he is melancholic. So don't expect rejoicing thoughts from him.On another point , i also don't really like how the Mc acted( in the 23rd chapter ) as though Killing was forced upon him. Emir had a choice. He could have let the hitmen go. So i don't understand why he lamented and acted as if it was forced upon him. If he acts in a certain way , he has to uphold his responsabilities. This all whinning time discredited him highly and it was even the final push for me to definetely stop reading this book.All in all , he is not irritating nor engaging. He is fine and just fine.Now for the side characters...They are forgetable( even the Mc's mother and his sister). - The pace is slow.As i said above , the pace is rather slow. And this together with the characters makes the story feels dragging.- I don't really like the book's general vibe .The book's ambiance is the reflection of the Mc : cold and melancholic. It doesnβt change one bit , and this ends up making the whole reading experience underwhelming.Finally , I pray for your improvement author and hope that my honest review does help you.
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