The novel captivates with its unique premise, deftly exploring the repercussions of a disrupted technological ecosystem. The narrative unfolds seamlessly, weaving a tapestry of suspense and curiosity.
Great story. Everything is well thought without major flaws. Apart from the beginning when the game is introduced, all the story is online at chapter 101. The only weakness of the author is the lack of narration of combat scenes.The MC is actually smart and not an average Joe described as a genius only to make dumb decisions later. The fact that being strong in the game is needed for survival is a nice addition. It is an awesome plot and I can't wait to read more.
A good start. I liked the plot. The pacing was slow and fast at times. I wish it was a little more steady. The grammar could use some work and mc seems kind of shallow. I mean, one para, he's excited, the next para he's startled and the next para he's shaking from fear. I wouldn't have complained about this if this wasn't the first chapter. I personally think this needs an edit. But overall, it was a good story.
I am the BONK of my sword Abst*nence is my body and Chast*ty is my blood I have created over a thousand bats Unknown to death Nor known to life Have withstood horni to create many bonks Yet those hands shall never hold anything So, as I pray, Unlimited Bonk Works
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