I never seen such messed up writing and story logic and bull sh it names even if other authors themselfs tried to do bad writing they couldn't do it this bad
.......... JUST HOW HOW CAN IT BE THIS BAD IT IS LIKE STORY ITSELF IS TRYING TO SUICIDE MY GOOD WHAT A ABOMINATION OF WRITING!!!!!!!!
Interesting story idea, good writing, and even understandable story with what's posted. I'd love to see more of this story. if I have one complaint it's that the author dropped it.
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it was a great book over all for the few chapters you had done. it was very interesting and easy to follow I wish that there was more chapters but sadly you dropped the story via cliffhanger-san.
I think it would have turned out to be a great book.
I'm shameless. Already knew that, but it's your fault. Yes I'm talking to you. Think I can't see you cause you behind your screen. Worst part is, your gonna read this and probably still won't leave a review.
Your what's wrong with these people today.
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I never seen such messed up writing and story logic and bull sh it names even if other authors themselfs tried to do bad writing they couldn't do it this bad
.......... JUST HOW HOW CAN IT BE THIS BAD IT IS LIKE STORY ITSELF IS TRYING TO SUICIDE MY GOOD WHAT A ABOMINATION OF WRITING!!!!!!!!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected]
We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
it was a great book over all for the few chapters you had done. it was very interesting and easy to follow I wish that there was more chapters but sadly you dropped the story via cliffhanger-san.
I think it would have turned out to be a great book.
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I'm shameless. Already knew that, but it's your fault. Yes I'm talking to you. Think I can't see you cause you behind your screen. Worst part is, your gonna read this and probably still won't leave a review.
Your what's wrong with these people today.
Back in my day I wouldn't even need to ask for a review, but I'd have to pay fo...
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