TURNING INTO A MACHINE

update this book! it's going well, but I lose interest fast if updates take too long.

I would appreciate if you could give me nice ratings dear readers ...

This book is so sweet.....️
the suspense .........
the flow of the book, I read over 20 chapters in a day and I still want more
I anticipate more release of other chapters

There are a lot of grammatical and consistency errors. Not a ton of character development from the main character, and SO MUCH RAMBLING. The concept is decent and I’m entertained for sure, but a lot of times, it’s just like, “Get to the point!”