no need to improve cuz this novel is already gone case mc is just disgusting who only thinks how to absorb and dispose of heroines truely a pice of shit. he doesn't feel like villain but he feels more like a child between protagonist and Beelzebub whe the had intense session. it would be better if author used lust system instead of gluttony. trust me if mc could have gotten heroines in his harem and whenever hero comes across his harem and system again lables them as heroines. he could milk them of points like broken cheat . all in all your novel fails the original work of art. the worst villain mc I have seen
I like this novel but it seems to be a Faloo novel and there are Repeats of the same Chapters (and no i don't have the raw) Faloo = Bad most of the time Because they like to western and butcher the story then translated
Bruh let me just put it in a way you'll understand..... if you haven't read this then you don't enjoy life. One of the BEST nove on this app. 1) no Bullsh#t like weak to strong mc 2) not a beta 3) not a pervert whose goal is to capture women like Pokemon 4) well developed plot to the point HE SHOULD BE WORKING ON COMICS!!! 5) a PERFECT story for those who don't like op mc form the start-- Though I seriously still don't understand why people don't like a op mc-- but regardless a PERFECT reason why he can't so readily destroy the universe ### I won't spoil the reason but I SWEAR TO GOD it is perfection#####
At home, Lilith go up to her roof for star gazing like usual, it was a full moon night the stars are twinkling sounds of crickets can be heard it was a little cloudy but she could see the moon clearly. It was like a scene from a dream, she was thinking laying on the ground, hands on the back of her head staring at the sky with clear eyes, " Hmm.... How much will the cake and gifts gonna cost, I have to start saving up some pocket money if I want to throw a party for Adrian....I wish Kyle was here he would definitely help me out to plan this and take care of Adrian, he must be pretty hurt from losing his father.... I wish he would be happy again and act like the happy go lucky guy like before....wish I could do something for him " sigh Lilith thinking . She has never stopped thinking about him a second these days and always praying that to make him happy again.
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