Okay, I've read all the 3 chapters so I'll give my thoughts. I'm interested in the system and the adventure.
As for things I've noticed, the story almost reads like a poem because of the short paragraphs. They are only one sentence long. I'm also trying to picture the main character in my mind since there isn't an in depth character description of him.
Keep up the good work and congratulations on this.
Really great story so far!!! Need more chapters soon pls. Highly recommend this one❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Man, I haven't enjoyed a book this much in a long time.. everything about it was amazing, and the MC is just my kind of MC. hurry and release more, fam. I'm here for it
Hi guys, I'm the writer of this story and I hope that you will enjoy this story as much as I love writing it. Please let me know what you think of it and I'll do my best to entertain you. Rate and review <3
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As for things I've noticed, the story almost reads like a poem because of the short paragraphs. They are only one sentence long. I'm also trying to picture the main character in my mind since there isn't an in depth character description of him.
Keep up the good work and congratulations on this.
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