The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries
How can i describe it?! Annoying!!This has similarities with Dr Ling Ran. If not from the same author then this is inspired by it. Both have MCs with super low EQs. What makes this worse is the actual MC itself. Given that he is plain looking, he is basically a wallpaper. Either people ignores him or they disrespects him. And again what is worse is he has no backbone to stand for himself. This started to get glaringly obvious when the infuriating Dr Su Yun(Dr Ling Ran who knows how to use his appearance to get what he wants) gets to join his team. The author keeps on going about on every scenario how this guys looks good and ladies keeps chasing after him while the same people look daggers or ignore the pitiful MC. And this same guys cant speak to the MC w/o insulting him. MC of course, is defenseless.Enough of my rant. I am not sure if the character development of the MC is a long term plan by the author. But like I said, it got worse when Dr Su gets into the picture. I will try a few more chapters and if there's no improvement, i will drop it.
Nice start there, being kidnapped by some tsundere and becoming a couple due to his handsome appearance. The system only has roles of improving his intelligence and fusing techniques cultivated to perfection, but the use of this function seems more redundant, and the quality of your writing is average. Everything else is acceptable for the moment.
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kinda nice.. the author put in a lot of schemes/mysteries in it, at times it even felt a bit unnecessary and forceful.. other than that it was a good read
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