Trapped: The Mafia King's Obsession

  • Genre: Urban
  • Author: Prettyfavy64
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. SpiritImmortal
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    I'm almost a 100 chapter in this novel. I like the story, it's good, okay. Just, him hiding his power is getting annoying. I mean, I get it, he doesn't want attention and there's still enemy out there. But it's annoying me how people kept looking down on him. And like, he showed his strength to some people already, some people who went to his college knew about it too, how could rumours not travel around at all? I'd probably understand if someone is suppressing the rumours to come out, but there was no mention of that at all. Like how could this annoying bunch not know of how strong he is, even walls have ears you know. I'll read more anyway, I kinda like the story after all.
  1. NandoFalske
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    The author has gotten so lazy it’s insane. Let me quote a moment where two of the Top Powers of a world meets and fights

    “Eternal Source was the first to release his aura as a signal.

    Eternal Source used his Dictator’s body to unleash his strongest attack.

    Vine Source, Hornless Dragon Source, and the others followed immediately, and five attacks shot toward Extreme Ocean.

    Given the circumstances, Extreme Ocean was unable to defend himself effectively. Thus, he ended up badly injured. Although he was still alive, he almost failed to keep up his Dictator’s body.”
    THATS IT. No descriptions of attacks, no telling of impacts to the worlds, no visualizations. This is chapter 2300 something while it wouldve taken the author 30 chapters for this fight earlier. This author literally uses 2 chapters to describe something we’ll never see in the future.

    The author doesnt know how to balance between filler and important stuff. It’s either too much filler or too miniscule important stuff.
  1. Gorloww
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    "This place is not suitable to what I'm about to do, let us go upstairs." I said.

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