JAE KYUNG COULDN'T LEAVE the place since she, as what the Crown Prince's bodyguards said, is the prime and the only witness of the attempt assassination of the Crown Prince.
The story is nice and all but the main character's attitude or should I say behavior to the protagonist (Long) is just somehow disturbing for me. I know he is scared of dying by the protagonist (Long) hands but come on, don't let it look too pathetic. As I continue reading, the main character's attitude of always trying to appease the protagonist is just too........
This definitely got potential. In terms of plot writing, it seems to be establishing itself quite nicely and am excited about the overall world building.Hope you execute it nicely.
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