There are too many grammar and present/past tense mistakes. Sometimes the phrase won't have any meaning and you'll have to try to guess what the author meant.
As for the story he usually rushes with the story part but is really slow and descriptive with the crafting part, which some might like and other might think is tecnobabble (like me).
Nevertheless, these rushed parts are still interesting and coupled with the MC upgrade ability, made for a nice story.
The author should cut a little on the crafting part and improve more the plot with interesting events in the sect with other people or ****** more adventures.
You should also add more challenge and stick to your power ranks. The MC wins too easily and too over his own level. Him as a rank 1 killing rank 19 is quite ridiculous and undermines your own system.
Also there are some really stupid plot devices like Strong Cultivators not interfering in an attack on the city by bandits because it's an attack made by the young generation and they don't want to get involved because of pride, the old can't fight the young or something.
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Outstanding indeed, this get rid of my boredom, upgrade upgrade upgrade, honestly if I were to have a system like that I would upgrade a brick to the limit and transcended it into a godly artifact and beat up those cliche young master with...
I started reading this novel due to the daily updates notice, sadly I am dropping it now, while I tolerated a lot in the beginning hoping it would improve sadly it is still as mediocre as ever. 1-2d characters, near total lack of world building, zero romance, a plethora of spelling and word mistakes that makes it seem totally machine translated. In short I advise the author to learn as much as he can from his mistakes, get an editor, then rewrite the whole novel, if he ever wants to actually pick up enough support to finish it.
when i saw the word upgrade specialist i remember there was a novel that has a upgrade specialist title too theres one chap that looks like in the orig idk but its kanda look alike chap search upgrade specialist in another world.
Poorly written story
okay update rate
Story is slow and sometimes really froced so that it is weird the person who is absolute ***** becomes his finace and is frist weaker he beats her then gets suddenly stronger without reasons or explenation and 1 hits him
characters design is bad ***** got name from authors irl person who lifes by him so you can expect a ***** charakter for the entire story
worl background is not so good
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2. You that read wrong
3. You read it wrong also
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wondering why you still reading this
8. You see the mistake right? (on7)
10. But did you see I skipped number 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9
13. And did you see I skipped number 2
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15. But did you see that I skipped number 12
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There are too many grammar and present/past tense mistakes. Sometimes the phrase won't have any meaning and you'll have to try to guess what the author meant.
As for the story he usually rushes with the story part but is really slow and descriptive with the crafting part, which some might like and other might think is tecnobabble (like me).
Nevertheless, these rushed parts are still interesting and coupled with the MC upgrade ability, made for a nice story.
The author should cut a little on the crafting part and improve more the plot with interesting events in the sect with other people or ****** more adventures.
You should also add more challenge and stick to your power ranks. The MC wins too easily and too over his own level. Him as a rank 1 killing rank 19 is quite ridiculous and undermines your own system.
Also there are some really stupid plot devices like Strong Cultivators not interfering in an attack on the city by bandits because it's an attack made by the young generation and they don't want to get involved because of pride, the old can't fight the young or something.
I facepalmed when I read this and almost dropped.
I thank you all for being so supportive to my novel and will promise to do better. Feel free to PM, or maybe comment my Review to tighten my screw a little in case I forget something.
THANK YOU EVERYBODY! Please Support the Transmigrating Upgrade Specialist and Zhang Wu Ji! (and leave Guan Qing Han alone.)
okay update rate
Story is slow and sometimes really froced so that it is weird the person who is absolute ***** becomes his finace and is frist weaker he beats her then gets suddenly stronger without reasons or explenation and 1 hits him
characters design is bad ***** got name from authors irl person who lifes by him so you can expect a ***** charakter for the entire story
worl background is not so good
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