Transmigration: Children of The Plane

For now i think it’s going well, but MC needs to differentiate himself from the rest. If all he’ll do is befriend strong characters he himself seems useless. it should centre him and if he befriends or kill’s the 5 plane children the it’s a bonus, all the 5 plane children happen to just make the story more interesting is what I’m saying. Basically what i‘m saying is i read the story but MC still feels detached, so far his feminine looks seem like the best thing about him when actually his potential is just as great as if not better than the plane children, but i guess maybe I’m judging to much he’s still 13 after all. Anyways I don’t know if Author see’s these comments but I’m definitely looking forward to his character development. ✌

very decent novel, it's not the exact same as other cultivation novels, but a few similarities, i hope that the author does make the character a bit more modern with retorts etc, but I Would say give it a read...while its free...

Loved this book! I am willing to spend fp(1) to unlock this book but plz 2x the production! the maid make her op too! and you can change the fate of small characters, make sure he is always hunting treasures, moving forward, it plateaued twice(bad!) 5star for 2x prod. req.

Top story bro. top story bro. hhhhh it has been long time since I readed such an interesting story

Im not an expert critic but if this is the work of a beginner then

such a well writen novel, this is a must read! i hope the Author will finish the novel, and the continuation of this one

A great novel so far with no super bad things about it. Hope the author doesn't drop it! Upload rate most definitely a plus though, 1 a day is hard to find for new novels.

A fun read if you have the time and with the daily upload rate its worth putting into you collection if you have extra time out of the day.

Chapters a shorter than the others in the genre though.

Still a good read at the end of the day.