This story is different from any other I've read. it's not only creative but also properly executed. Thus far I've loved reading it, and will continue to do so.
I don't remember how i stumbled on this novel (actually i do,but i think that's not to relevant), I've read my fair share of "transmigrated/reincarnated" type of novels so I think i can somewhat be fair in this review. While the starting is generic like in most novels of this type (except for the part where the MC is an artist? maybe..) the first few chapters are kinda chaotic,i think is reflecting the MC not adapting to the "new reality" and maybe it's a "throw off" for some of the readers, but then it get better. The "system" has his own "personality" so to say (and maybe it doesn't want what's best for you all the time),the powers are "gifts" and can be somewhat transferred,and from chapter 14 you starting to get clues about the main plot and the pacing of the story starts to ramp up. I've given 4.4/5
Okay, I am heavily confused, I think I might be going crazy? cause I read too chapter 20 and so far, the grammar is HORRID and the sentences are confusing as heck, the pacing is absolutely WACK and the world-building feels rushed, am I just going crazy? Why are there GOOD reviews? Is this actually a good story and I just need to go to an insane asylum?
Plot - 100%
World-building - 150%
Writing - 200%
Characters - 250%
Overall it is an awesome story that has a blend of transmigration, fantasy, and dragon(of course, the story would be boring without a dragon). Do give this story a try to get a different touch of fantasy with system...
The concept of the story is super generic but the writing is good enough that I don't care. I like how the MC just drunkenly fall into his fantasy world. I will definitely be back to read more later.
from the start the mc starts acting like an idiot, stopping to think in battle about which cool lines to say, the system prompts are way to annoying repeating the same thing over and over, i quit there
I tried really hard to like this but I just can't. I'm very confused and nothing makes sense. The family interaction is weird. The MC has constant mood swings of being angry and then guilty for no reason whatsoever. Does he like them or dislike them ? Do they like him or dislike him? We never find out.
Then he goes to the academy without knowing anything and just shows off everywhere, casually insults teachers and casually harasses women that always like it.
Also this guy defeated a dragon, supposedly the strongest kind of creature in the world after about a day of being there. Is he invincible now? If dragons are that weak then why are they a threat? Are teachers stronger than him, cause he doesn't seem worried at all even in the middle of enemy territory.
Sorry for the bad review but I really don't get it.
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I can't and refuse to be ashamed of my book.
World-building - 150%
Writing - 200%
Characters - 250%
Overall it is an awesome story that has a blend of transmigration, fantasy, and dragon(of course, the story would be boring without a dragon). Do give this story a try to get a different touch of fantasy with system...
Then he goes to the academy without knowing anything and just shows off everywhere, casually insults teachers and casually harasses women that always like it.
Also this guy defeated a dragon, supposedly the strongest kind of creature in the world after about a day of being there. Is he invincible now? If dragons are that weak then why are they a threat? Are teachers stronger than him, cause he doesn't seem worried at all even in the middle of enemy territory.
Sorry for the bad review but I really don't get it.