Transmigrated with 100 billion peoples in another world

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I would be very grateful if you could support me by donating any amount since I work and am a student, so I don't have much free time to write. I will leave my paypal link in my profile for those who want to help me.Thanks.😉😉

Its a great concept for a story that is developed well. but big issue i have that makes it near impossible to keep going is the overused troupe of every conceiving him as weak. for me it just causes such frustration that I struggle to push through and continue.

This is my honest opinion after reading few chapters. The concept is good. Not the best but surely good because of the pair  ~ Ashton and Matt. The conversations are funny between them and one can enjoy while reading. Parallelly, the author also tries to induce the world details in between and the character's growth too as the chapters proceeds.The author has a nice way to show interactions. They are flowy, engaging, and are filled with enough humor.Overall, it was a nice read.Cons (According to me): I couldn't read the synopsis. It was preventing me from reading your work. A synopsis must contain vital details and should be very intriguing cause this is the deciding factor that will make readers whether they want to read or not. And, when I saw the synopsis, I almost dropped your work.Secondly, grammatical errors. I found many of them. I can ignore the punctuations but errors in grammar are a bit too much. So, those need to be fixed.Keep up the good work!!This work has potential. You just need to fix some things and you are good to go.

Leo started to gather metal and yang mana into his mace. He then looked down at his feet and adjusted them differently than how he usually does when he executes Buffalo Three Step. Placing his left foot back while leaning forward, it looked like he was about to use a new technique.

"ha?" he woke up. His wounds almost healed up. He is now in a perfect condition.  

She spat a bit of blood on the Yearning Heartbroken Red.

"Z-zaina? As in Park Zaina?"