A good story about the child of shamelessness, Writen by the progenitor of shamelessness.The story is still in its infancy but it has a lot of potetial with a hilarious protagonist. The world settings are looking good so long but there is a little lack of information to put the entire story in focus. Good start but if not changed it will fast lose momentum if no goal/purpus and power/economical system is added later.
I think it is extremely well written so far and can't wait to see what is to come in the future. The writer is extremely good but I did not find anything that stands out overall
is the story done? are there more chapters? how long has it been since the last chapter released ? the story was good, but the 20 + chapters near the end were boring and not worth the coins to unlock, I have not read 105+ because I'm not willing to drop 250 coins just to pay more coins to unlock the chapters.
Even though that yellow dressed lady was veiled and Yi Ping could not see her face clearly, he could tell she must be a beautiful maiden. Her complexion was extremely fair and appeared flawless. She had thin delicate eyebrows and her mesmerizing eyes were sparking.
It began with great loss and failure. The small boats they had were crushed by the waves. Many lives were lost and the plan to explore the lost sea was abandoned. Great Wars have begun over resources and resourceful lands. Empires would fall and new ones no longer rose. The resources were nearly gone, the land was becoming unfertile, people began dying of starvation. All this lead to the First Age. The Age of Loss. The horrors within this Age frightened even the bravest, but all was not lost.
He looked at her and his lips involuntarily curved into a slight smile at her actions. He was amused as he tried to imagine what she would do if he let the horse move fast on his own. "she would probably scream and faint" He was more than amused at the thought. Truthfully, he had never seen a woman who didn't know how to ride a horse. It was a means of transportation and everybody learns it from childhood as soon as they grow tall enough or old enough.
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