the story is good from the start and the Mc is to OP not until on chapter 30+ and when Fubuki is from another world too and he know all the plot and the you know is not what you think she's annoying keep asking the mc about his past and power and the suddenly become a simp and dumb he tell all his power to Fubuki and all he's secret as well....
the English and writing... is barely readable, you could but you need to have patience in rearranging them to make it manageable.
Mistakes like comma, capital letters and redundancy are issues I just... sigh.
other than the occasional commentary, there isn't much of a change and that's just a waste of time, as I could just watch the anime.
the Character... there are a lot of plotholes like his psychology and pacing in character development, he didn't change and even if he did he just copy pace the mc. And not a good one at that.
the System... god why... normally I have no problem but the pacing and redundancy is just an eyesore.
dude the author is just not able to make original plot so he is rewriting OPM well up to chapter 9 i say 9 becous i droped it ther the mc is saitama with hair (that is all) and i was bored after 3chapters
See; this is what I don't understand about these types of fanfics, It is basically just cannon with slight changes.. Author why would we read a fanfic, if the story is the same as cannon?!?!?! who would do that? I'd rather just read the original if that is the case,, apart from small changes here and there, it isn't anything interesting.. and not even funny like how this series was supposed to be.. (SD1/5)
writing quality is "meh", if you ignore the random 4th wall breaks.. (WQ2/5)
stability of updates is terrible.. (SOU1/5)
character design, it is basically Saitama but boring (CD1/5)..
world background, hardly any descriptions of locations, it is like Mc is here, the goes home, then goes to the supermarket or manga store.. I mean, where are they? whats the time when he did that? so yeah, no world building..
honestly.. this is a poor attempt at a fanfic.. that's my review.. (OVERALL1.2)
Writing Quality: Worst than MTL. But Ill give two stars for the sake of having an auto correct and auto paraphrase in my brain.
Story Development: What is that? This fanfic doesnt have that. It just follows the plot with slight changes.
Character Design: Imagine Saitama as MC but a simp. Fubuki is also what you didnt expect. she's a reincarnator so the author just wanted Fubuki for her body. Totally wasted my time reading this because of that.
Updating Stability: Might as well the author drop this and start a new one. Since he barely updates this fanfic.
World Background: Author expects us to have read the manga or anime so he didn't tell us about the time, place, etc.
Overall: Would not suggest for you readers to read this if you expect a nice Fubuki X Saitama fluff. This is just disappointment. This is a low tier fanfic. Even worst than those harem gotta catch them all like pokemon fanfic. I tried my best persevering through reading it but I could only reach 40 chapters.
Yeah I just tried to read through but every time I read it just gets harder to read, random 4th wall breaks or ranting about thinks I haven't even seen others comment on.
Random powers even though none of them are needed dude becomes a sword master but can barely describe what a sword even looks like. Imma be honest only started reading cause Fubiki but its not even Fubiki its a transmigrater in Fubiki.
He hides powers for the plot... all that. In my eyes the translation isn't terrible but it gets harder and harder to read is you get further in. And it just follows the stroy without much change, which is boring but I don't blame the author for it.
trash stories with mc have too much power and don't have good control (for writers it's been good). even having a lot of power can't keep his mind from being read by others, well I suggest you guys don't read this garbage.oh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guardingoh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guarding mind so that it is not easy to read
Can't say I'm impressed with the character given other abilities if already godlike. The power of Flight I'm rather content with, but the other powers were unnecessary...
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I just waste my time reading this!!!!
Mistakes like comma, capital letters and redundancy are issues I just... sigh.
other than the occasional commentary, there isn't much of a change and that's just a waste of time, as I could just watch the anime.
the Character... there are a lot of plotholes like his psychology and pacing in character development, he didn't change and even if he did he just copy pace the mc. And not a good one at that.
the System... god why... normally I have no problem but the pacing and redundancy is just an eyesore.
writing quality is "meh", if you ignore the random 4th wall breaks.. (WQ2/5)
stability of updates is terrible.. (SOU1/5)
character design, it is basically Saitama but boring (CD1/5)..
world background, hardly any descriptions of locations, it is like Mc is here, the goes home, then goes to the supermarket or manga store.. I mean, where are they? whats the time when he did that? so yeah, no world building..
honestly.. this is a poor attempt at a fanfic.. that's my review.. (OVERALL1.2)
Story Development: What is that? This fanfic doesnt have that. It just follows the plot with slight changes.
Character Design: Imagine Saitama as MC but a simp. Fubuki is also what you didnt expect. she's a reincarnator so the author just wanted Fubuki for her body. Totally wasted my time reading this because of that.
Updating Stability: Might as well the author drop this and start a new one. Since he barely updates this fanfic.
World Background: Author expects us to have read the manga or anime so he didn't tell us about the time, place, etc.
Overall: Would not suggest for you readers to read this if you expect a nice Fubuki X Saitama fluff. This is just disappointment. This is a low tier fanfic. Even worst than those harem gotta catch them all like pokemon fanfic. I tried my best persevering through reading it but I could only reach 40 chapters.
Random powers even though none of them are needed dude becomes a sword master but can barely describe what a sword even looks like. Imma be honest only started reading cause Fubiki but its not even Fubiki its a transmigrater in Fubiki.
He hides powers for the plot... all that. In my eyes the translation isn't terrible but it gets harder and harder to read is you get further in. And it just follows the stroy without much change, which is boring but I don't blame the author for it.