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i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go :- as of right now updates seems ok -decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel .- nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm.- Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree .i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment 💀💀
A great read. Finished the free chapters and enjoyed it very much. Though there were a few places where the writing was a little overboard, I liked the story so far. The writing has improved considerably from the first few chapters, keeping me hooked.Go, author! You rock!
Ma hong jun looked at them as he nodded and said "yeah he was the one, teacher said that since the founding of shrek he was the one he proudest of and the most talented, and some time ago when l ask teacher how he is when he was at our age and teacher only looked at me like looking at an idiot "he became spirit ancestor at fourteen and spirit king at sixteen and he can already go toe to toe with zhao wuji when he was sixteen so do you think you can compare to him?
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