I'm thoroughly confused with this story .It's boring . MC killed his patents by his own mistake . Well here goes nothing .Read if you want .but I don't recommend it .
If they could just reset everyone’s account on the game, couldn’t they just delete someone’s account if the got too powerful? which would make it impossible for the MC to get back as the #1 player then??
OP MC(future) - ✅Good drama- ✅Harem(don't know about love interest but) - ✅Good setup and background- ✅character development- ✅WHAT ELSE DO YOU WANT? JUST READ IT!
This has been by far one of my favourite novels even if I did lose it for a year and struggled to find it again 😂 but I happily reread and continued reading it again
I didn’t realize they let litttle kids write here, the story is worse then invisble dragon. Avoid to save brain cells, or face becoming braindead like the author,
This is a re-review and one with some honesty. First of all the story turned into something else than I intended, and it was actually worse in some parts than my first. I made the mc edgy for the sake of him being edgy. Elior is almost a character without flaws but I made him somewhat a hypocrite intentionally.The worldbuilding was dull, and honestly, I have saved up a few things for later parts. which turned out to be a bad decision.The writing quality is poor, and you will expect a lot of typos. If you don't fear it then feel free to continue. As for the story development and plot, it is above average with a few nice fight scenes, here and there. and the main idea of the book is pretty good.Like my other book, this one got its voice in the chapter 70s. Honestly, I still think the book is better than many on this site with all those flaws. Continue if you like and leave behind comments.
I also like mysterious stories. Good going keep it up..... I am eagerly waiting for 3rd chapter. I know it would be interesting. Having fun reading it.
The plot is excellent and the fact that you created a new power system I loved it, I like it when an author innova tes. What I don't understand is because he is a kapitan and not a captain. This was translated by google translator. PD:good job
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