TM: Vengeance of the Indomitable and Crazed Shades

Good ff, keep it up  🍺🐼                                                                                                                  

Some advice for the Author. Please note that this is meant as constructive criticism, not complaining, as I love the story.You really need to get an English Thesaurus to broaden your vocabulary and help find more appropriate descriptive words. I know others have spoken to you about "lowly" being used improperly already (should word swap every instance of "lowly" with "softly"), but some other words are really out of place as well. For example; "nodding furiously in agreement". Furiously is a word normally used to describe a degree of anger. It "can" be used to describe intensity, but "nodding furiously" will throw off your readers because it implies anger (check the definition of the root word "fury" to better understand why). There are several other words that would better describe the visual you were intending, such as "vigorously

So basically you are all hyping about a novel in which the Mc is a skeleton and gets contracted by a female "goddess" or something. What's the use? he cannot even kiss much less have the stick. And this novel probably has an unreasonable plot. But people are still 5 star spamming it. hope they grow some brain.

I'm so impressed. This is indeed what is referred to as great imagination! The time you're taking or perhaps took to come up with such a plot deserves all the stars. so keep writing. I loved the book and I'm definitely in for the next chapters.

Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

(Lexa)

" Captain?" Nikolai said after entering the helicopter."Dothe Americans attacked Al Asad?"

When his hands were about to reach Zeno's head, he felt a sharp aura locking into him stopping his movements. He felt that if he makes one more move, he will be cut in two. He gazes towards Zeno who was holding the hilt of his sword with an unknown smile on his face. The two men behind him were also staring at him like they were looking at a fool.