Well thought out concept and descriptively tailored world background. The novel is interesting and intriguing with a well maintained uniqueness.
Good job author!
pretty good read so far, im interested to see what happens next. grammar and writing is good, especially when compared to most of this site. just please don't drop it!
Writing Quality: 3/5
Your writing is not bad but you have a few problems with punctuation, and a bit unnecessary wording.
Updating Stability: 5/5
I put everyone's like this.
Story Development: 4/5
The pacing of your story is good, please keep up with that. I like the plot developing, although I did tend to get a bit bored at times, but it did not stop me from fully leaving.
Character Design: 3.5/5 (I have to round to four on the thing)
I feel the MC to be a bit bland, but not all the bad as a character. I do like the other characters you added and how you give their personality through their dialogue.
World Background: 4/5
I enjoyed the first chapter the most in the sense of world building, you did a good job at painting a picture on your world.
In conclusion, the story is not bad, it is interesting but at the same time could get a bit boring. But getting past the boring part, the story is good. Keep up the good work, author.
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Good job author!
Your writing is not bad but you have a few problems with punctuation, and a bit unnecessary wording.
Updating Stability: 5/5
I put everyone's like this.
Story Development: 4/5
The pacing of your story is good, please keep up with that. I like the plot developing, although I did tend to get a bit bored at times, but it did not stop me from fully leaving.
Character Design: 3.5/5 (I have to round to four on the thing)
I feel the MC to be a bit bland, but not all the bad as a character. I do like the other characters you added and how you give their personality through their dialogue.
World Background: 4/5
I enjoyed the first chapter the most in the sense of world building, you did a good job at painting a picture on your world.
In conclusion, the story is not bad, it is interesting but at the same time could get a bit boring. But getting past the boring part, the story is good. Keep up the good work, author.
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Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can earn from your current story or new ideas, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.