Tina’s excapades

Becca and Mike both knew there is no way they can keep lying to their dad so it was better to come clean so Mike said in a guilty tone" No it's not because we did anything wrong but it was because you told us we should not meddle in adults matter as we are kids"

Xenon:humihingi po ako ng sorry sir kung nag matigas po ako sainyo sorry din po kung ngayon lang ako sorry po talaga

Ugh..  Maybe I should stop them since this getting dangerous. With that in mind, I release mana pressure on the middle-aged guard. He goes flat on the floor at once. Confused, the middle-aged guard looks at me with his gaze, while the chief looks at me blankly.

Ji-a didn't say anything.

He continued talking, but I didn't hear anything, tears welling up in my eyes, I ran home, I ran and I ran, until my feet hurt, But I don't feel the pain.

???: He's out !! Miss here is your son...

You'll notice that the people rating this novel badly are the ones who only read the few first chapters then stopped. Understandable, the MC feels like a cliched teenager at the very (very) beginning and the pace is bit slow so the story doesn't really take off immediately. BUT, it gets better and better the more you read it and I personally really like it! The MC isn't cliched at all actually and there are interesting side characters. We start seeing a bit more of the world and plot the author is developing and I, for one, got really invested....But, the updates are slow unfortunately so the enjoyment gets broken. I honestly just hope this won't be yet another unfinished novel on WN...

I read it up to chapter 15. In my opinion, this book has the potential to be an engrossing novel if the author learns from his mistakes when he is writing this book. You can't say much about the whole book when it has only this many chapters but the characters are fine, they don't have much depth and they are a little cliché but you can read without feeling anger about them every chapter. Mc is not stupid and we see that he thinks before taking action, so he has some common sense in his head and you may like him (some even may say that he is smart) and for sure he is not a person who thinks only by his lower body parts, there are problems with him like author make him extremely cold in some situation but sometimes he behaves like petty and very emotional but nothing that can't be changed for the better later in the story.  Worldbuilding is great and very interesting, but you just need to lower your expectations a bit to enjoy it if you have high standards.  Updates are chaotic sometimes you have so many chapters that you think is Christmas and other days there are none for 2 days.  The author responds to comments so he is engaged in this novel and for now, it seems like he cares a lot about the book and tries to learn to make it better, for me, that is a huge plus.  In my opinion, if made well this can be more than mediocre but if the author doesn't learn from his mistakes or stop trying to improve this can be worse than mediocre. It's worth trying if you like Villain MC and have some time to spear and help this author shine by leaving your opinion in the comments.  I wish you a marvelous day, friends from around the globe.

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