So far the story is great would be perfect if the author describes everything a bit more such as mc, setting/background/new significant place such as when the mc got to the sect author never really described the mc's first impression and the surroundings. Maybe the author will do it in future chapter but it's always better to described as the character moves on his journey, well at least what he is felling and what he sees in his surroundings. Also, try to describe the characters appearance a bit more. This seems to be a major issue in the original novel section, hopefully the author improves on this. One more thing that's killing me is please use capital letter for first letter of the sentence and names. Overall the story is great but needs more details, you want the readers to feel or try to feel what the character is experiencing and picture everything.
Ok I spent the first half of this book cursing it because it was almost painful to read. I kept reading because I actually like the MC even if he is such a doormat in the first half. The story going on in the background with his origins is why I kept reading because it was interesting and other than the fact that his family is a total nightmare, and he won't stand up to them for most of the first half...it still had good points with the rest of what was happening around him. The second half of the book was much better because he finally stopped letting himself get pushed around. It was a process for real. BUT now it stopped at 200 chapters just as I was getting really into it and it hasn't been updated in forever. PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH THE STORY!!
Me emociona este libro, es sencillamente maravilloso. A medida que lo leo no puedo evitar preguntarme como es que yo no había escuchado de él antes. Maravilloso, sigue así
Everything sucks as if your first fifty chapters suck than how in the world are you gonna get readers. Writing style sucks, word arrangement sucks, don't know english, don't know how to or whete to use prepositions. Total **** story.
Don’t read this novel. The author deletes bad reviews. The latest app updates shows you when your reviews are deleted and it’s easy to go into your profile and see who deleted them. Way to go author. I left a legit review about the sh!tty parts of your book and how the MC is a total idiot and not an S-Ranker and how he makes so many stupid low IQ decisions but I guess that hurt your feelings so much that you deleted my review? Nice one. I’ve copied and pasted this review and will just repost it since you have a habit of deleting reviews. Way to play yourself you idiot. We can actually track what books delete reviews lmao. You’re so dumb. Third time he’s deleted the review.
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