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Not worth the read. WN needs to up their game on which novels they are choosing. The characters can almost be called brainless, and their development are nigh. :)
Hi there, Author-Nim.After reading the first volume of this book, I give this book a 3,8 review. Here I explain why.1) Writing QualityThis book has a lot of typos and grammatical errors just as the author has explained. I can understand that because my native language is not English. However, the number of words for each chapter is inconsistent. I found out some chapters were short, and some were a bit long.2) Story DevelopmentThe pace of the story is kinda slow at some points and made me feel bored. However, the story itself is pretty good even though some parts kinda confusing without any explanation.3) Character DesignThe character description is pretty decent I guess? But I think you forgot to explain what Alex looks like.4) Updating StabilityIt's good to know if you keep updating every day, but the time is kinda random. I can understand that after I read your first Auxiliary chapter.5) World BackgroundKinda vague in my mind since you said that there are three worlds in this book, but I started to understand it the more I read.I hope you do better next time.- Eien Warui.
With the cries of his beloved feeding his hearing, he was nothing but a father who seeks the comfort of revenge. That day, blood coated the walls and columns of the House of Livianus, and the dominus with his gladius dripping with the fruit of his misdeed. 3 trusted body slaves lost their lives for their negligence, and 2 elite soldiers were found brutally amputated and decapitated.
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