Si definitivamente es una gran historia, con ese toque de maldad fluida en el protagonista y con sustento solido, (cuando aveces confunden a alguien oscuro con cabrón ), me gusta como se desarrolla la trama futura al leer está novela me trae buenos recuerdos de otra gran historia, pero tristemente por razones de sensibles la buscaron eliminar hasta en otros sitios web.Psdt: ten cuidado cuando pongas escenas subidas de tono por que talvez las usen en tu contra por contenido no autorizado o algo asi.🤝
this is by far the worst novel I have ever read on character development. The MC is the dumbest person ever. he never thinks before doing anything. whatever bad has happened in the story has all been his fault because he is stupid. I am currently on chapter 825 but there is no change in character development. The author please do something about it, you are clearly ruining this novel. also please be clear about his cultivation at all times.
so far what you have written is pretty solid for a fan fic. keep up the good writting and please dont try to inject the MC into the main story of the anime, alot of fan fics try that and it ruins the story. something like a while that is happening the mc is doing something major to the side is always good.
As previous, in depth, review has been blocked gonna keep it simple. Extremely unrealistic racist and bigoted scenarios once you get a few hundred chapters in.
Overpowered MC with lack of wits and cruel , no rival , no love interest, no family, or even allies, just NPC subordinate. Bad story telling overly cautious MC that would slaughter everything because his lack of security and severe distrust. Not a wise leader, , just a cruel , dumb , demonic racist .
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please continue this and don't DROP this Authorsama .zhjsjsjakkakdkcdkkdznndndnsjsdhdhdhjdjdjdjdkdkdkkdkdkdkkddhjdjdjdjdjddjjdjdjdjdjxjcjfjjejsjsjsjsudhdjdjdjjfjfjfdgshsiiaidjcjdjjxjchhcgreyhdhcbdhdhfjjfjdjjcjdjdhysyahhfhdhxhjddjjd
Its okay. The characters are very not not funny not funny funny. Its a funny novel. But it needs more chapters. Even though the novel might be new I suggest that you make 10 chapters before you actually release your novel. Think about it, you can go back and chech your spelling after you release your chapters.
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