The slice-of-life narrative offers a decent portrayal, but the main character (MC) feels robotic, adhering to predetermined behaviors in specific situations. When there's no compelling reason for them to act, they display a lack of emotion and initiative, resulting in a rather dull persona. Their true identity seems non-existent.
The story itself is rather formulaic, with the system playing a dominant role in driving the plot. Without the system, the MC is insignificant, and their existence is void of purpose. However, this isn't necessarily a negative point, as it aligns with the expectations of the genre I'm familiar with.
Another thrill. That made my mind aches and my heart... So good. I just read 2 chapters. Like i was bleeding. ?? Over all 10. Please don't hesitate to continue this.
snails crawl story build up, very minimal character progression until literally the very end, a very forgettable story plot, with as naive as the main character is I was actually hoping she didn't make it, grammar/typographical errors galore
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The story itself is rather formulaic, with the system playing a dominant role in driving the plot. Without the system, the MC is insignificant, and their existence is void of purpose. However, this isn't necessarily a negative point, as it aligns with the expectations of the genre I'm familiar with.