Finnally a novel with a turtle mc, im not expecting much just let it be decent.(Ok apparrently my post has to have a certain amount of words to be posted so this is just filler)
First, I have read the novel...up to chapter 229 actually, I only created this account to write this review because I cannot remember my other one's password and do not have access to it at this time. First, I will say that you had a great story going for the first 200 chapters or so. Then, you decided that the mc needed a "bump" in the road. I'm all for that, but not when the "bump" destroys literally all 200 chapters before it. LIterally, undead legion...gone...endgame villain...gone...gods we have never heard of or been hinted at...here? I feel that was a poorly planned bump and I feel no motivation to read after he lost the king, the abyssal knights, his original goal, his boyz, everything. At first I thought he would get it back, but then in chapter 213-215 suddenly Zoe isn't even the main love interest anymore. Vanessa, who was only mentioned like twice, is suddenly who he seems to like because he is too stupid to realize Zoe likes him. Nobody is that dumb...come on. Then Mercy even becomes one too? Really? The interesting love interest built up masterfully for 200 chapters no longer seem so to matter. His work is all gone....I'm sorry but even if he gets everything back it will feel fake. A bump is good, but if it destroys everything before it then it was not well done. Sorry but I'm gonna have to quit reading, please enjoy your passion and continue your work.
I will give you readers some advice of what kind of the author personally he/she really is.1: I have notice some of the authors chapter are very similar with other chinese or japanese Novels that i have already read, Then I realized that some of it are just copy paste while the author tweak some of the words to not make it the same.2: The author notes is bull**** there are so many reason why he cant update regularly and will make so many excuses why he/she cant do it3: Some of his book are premium when some fans of his/her works spends ss to unlock some chapter then this author will suddenly Drop the novel he/she make without a single **** given.
Well author, I must say that I have not read your novel yet, but the synopsis hooked me and I read some reviews here, a silly MC?Surely can not exceed the oversized in its first 100 chapters.But changing the subject, I will give you my spiritual stones because I feel the cosmic forces tell me that your novel has potential.**: I'm a guy from Latin America, so I use a translator, sorry if some parts are strange, uwu
Having read the previous books one is in best position to appreciate the sequential unfolding of the plots and storyline The Author of this Sequence has done a great brain job It's not easy to capture and maintain readers' interest Thank you for that Although it's tiring to figure out somethings before putting it in writing yet l want to solicit for more Chapters per release So far The Story is 🆒🆒
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