It’s a great read the author is able to take a chunk of history and turn it in to a story that you get completely immersed into before you know it your done with it
It’s a great book
Keep up the good work author
Although there were something that I got stuck on like how ther were so many perspectives showed at once in completely different places which is normal it still flowed smoothly for the most part
This book is unique in its right. What I admire the most is the eccentric writing which I noticed since its in stark contrast to mine.
Writing Quality: Its great. I find myself able to follow the story and even the more specialised terminology well because its presented quite well.
Character Design: I sorta feel that it's lacking a bit, not in the sense of development but purely design. I'm heavily biased towards visualising my characters and I feel like I don't get enough of that.
Story Development: it kinda stunted for him in some of the chapters, but then went back to a great flow. Overall its good.
World Background: As far as I've read is great and keeps building up with the mechanics as well.
Overall great story that I recommend to readers.
A unique novel! I've read countless webnovel but this is the first time I read a novel with this kind of idea. It is written well, despite the author just starting his writing life. I can see the potential! Especially the author! Good job!
And I'm pretty sure that those who love slice of life genre, will like the story.
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It’s a great book
Keep up the good work author
Although there were something that I got stuck on like how ther were so many perspectives showed at once in completely different places which is normal it still flowed smoothly for the most part
Writing Quality: Its great. I find myself able to follow the story and even the more specialised terminology well because its presented quite well.
Character Design: I sorta feel that it's lacking a bit, not in the sense of development but purely design. I'm heavily biased towards visualising my characters and I feel like I don't get enough of that.
Story Development: it kinda stunted for him in some of the chapters, but then went back to a great flow. Overall its good.
World Background: As far as I've read is great and keeps building up with the mechanics as well.
Overall great story that I recommend to readers.
And I'm pretty sure that those who love slice of life genre, will like the story.
Keep up the good work!