I enjoyed reading it, author. Hope you won't drop this story. It's well-written and engaging, so just wait for some time and I'm sure people will discover this gem. :-)
Keep the good work btw!
Questions I need answers to or I won’t change my ratings.
1. Why would a zombie need money when even the living don’t use it?
2. Delicacies? What delicacies can a zombie even eat eh? Brains and flesh or some gel or stone inside other zombies head if the story is cliche enough, but other than that I can’t think of a single thing.
3. How can someone so lazy be powerful enough to become queen of the zombies?
4. If she is so lazy, how is it that she have enough energy to even get revenge? Can’t she just avoid them and live peacefully since she is soo lazy?
I’m the author of ‘The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance’. I’m going to use the review panel to write about a few things I wasn’t certain where to put before. Also, please ignore my rating. I just shamelessly put it at 5 stars, because why not, right?
As of now I’ve got honestly no idea how long the novel will be. I’ve got most of the plot figured out, but as of right now I’m still not sure if everything of it will be used unchanged. I’ve been writing now for quite some time, but it’s my first time trying to put my writing out there, and in a foreign language to that. Because of that, while I am trying to check grammar, I may make some mistakes. In case anybody sees some, feel free to point it out to me. I will gladly fix it.
About the story itself, since I know that’s probably what is the most interesting for a lot of people, here’s some information's. Even though it’s a novel with an Apocalypse oriented world, I’m not really a fan of fighting, or rather my abilities to write fights aren’t good enough. Because of that I will be trying to take the novel in a slightly different direction, in which my female lead will be more focused on her daily life, and perhaps what she knows best – business.
That’s why her abilities won’t really be supper offensive, and she herself, even though she is called the Zombie Queen, won’t be super overpowered.
About romance. There will be some, and the main couple won’t take long to get together after meeting each other. But the thing is, our ML is going to need some time to come out. So, don’t expect him to be running around FL too soon.
The story is pretty good.However,i'd advise you to change the cover.
The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good.
So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story.
Apart from this your story is very nice.
The first chapter of the story got me hypnotized. Maybe because there's a lot of Chu name and I honestly not use to reading a name like your characters. But anyways, the story is great.
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Keep the good work btw!
1. Why would a zombie need money when even the living don’t use it?
2. Delicacies? What delicacies can a zombie even eat eh? Brains and flesh or some gel or stone inside other zombies head if the story is cliche enough, but other than that I can’t think of a single thing.
3. How can someone so lazy be powerful enough to become queen of the zombies?
4. If she is so lazy, how is it that she have enough energy to even get revenge? Can’t she just avoid them and live peacefully since she is soo lazy?
I’m the author of ‘The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance’. I’m going to use the review panel to write about a few things I wasn’t certain where to put before. Also, please ignore my rating. I just shamelessly put it at 5 stars, because why not, right?
As of now I’ve got honestly no idea how long the novel will be. I’ve got most of the plot figured out, but as of right now I’m still not sure if everything of it will be used unchanged. I’ve been writing now for quite some time, but it’s my first time trying to put my writing out there, and in a foreign language to that. Because of that, while I am trying to check grammar, I may make some mistakes. In case anybody sees some, feel free to point it out to me. I will gladly fix it.
About the story itself, since I know that’s probably what is the most interesting for a lot of people, here’s some information's. Even though it’s a novel with an Apocalypse oriented world, I’m not really a fan of fighting, or rather my abilities to write fights aren’t good enough. Because of that I will be trying to take the novel in a slightly different direction, in which my female lead will be more focused on her daily life, and perhaps what she knows best – business.
That’s why her abilities won’t really be supper offensive, and she herself, even though she is called the Zombie Queen, won’t be super overpowered.
About romance. There will be some, and the main couple won’t take long to get together after meeting each other. But the thing is, our ML is going to need some time to come out. So, don’t expect him to be running around FL too soon.
I think that’s all for now.
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The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good.
So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story.
Apart from this your story is very nice.
I always adored zombie apocalypse type of stories, like zombie sister strategy. So i'd probably read it more.