Back then I was really that pick up thos novel. It was surpringly good but after a long time qudian or the autor change release policy. After chapter 266 it is premium only so don't bother to read it if you don't have a *** load of SS or money to unlock the remaining of 400 chapters :/
this story had a lot of potential but it seems the author is writing it wrong. the author seems to not have planned out the story and just keeps adding whatever he wants even though it ruins the story he set at the start. *SPOILER* for example, he first describes the female MC as a helpless person but later says how she would have been able to defend herself. its really inconsistent and ruins the flow of the story. as for how to fix it, it seems the only way is to start the story again.
I see people giving it a bad rating and I feel bad because I love this story there is amazing character development the authors wrighting improves although the beginning is a little meh it gets a whole lot better and that whole meh part just becomes character development although I was look for a different type of story this completely surprised me and I love it during the beginning it might seem like the mc was wasting his time later in the story the skill that he got during that time are not very visible but important to the story and the character it's slow pasted but every chapter and event bring more understanding to the world around and the characters the mc does start with only 2 people on his side that slowly changes it's part of the slow pasted and it not like he magically get more people on his side he has to talk and create friendship or his original 2 I do think the title fits as not only do I think that we are only seeing the beginning of what the system can do I also think that there is no other title that fits this story I hope people see this review and don't worry about the bad reviews and get at least 100 in that is definitely when you have seen its charm the bad reviews are probably people from the beginning chapters and didn't really get into the real story
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The plot is captivating, I really enjoyed this novel. A few errors here and there but that can be easily solved with one proofread or two. Punctuation is great. Everything was vividly described, and the details in the world background are just precise. Good job author and I wish you the very best!The pace is smooth too by the way.
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I divided my archers to four, my mages by two and melee fighters by 3. While the enemies where still a distance away. My melee fighter are at the center while my mages and archers are their wings.
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