Itโs a great novel, interesting idea, good story background, better then average character descriptions and great writing quality the only complaint is that there so much more chapters on p-a-t-r-e-o-n then here and Iโm broke but besides that itโs a great story so far, I hope it will continue to be great. ๐๐๐๐๐
This is my first novel so I'm extremely nervous mainly because English is not my native language.I want to write every part of Zhen Han's life: from his birth to the moment he achieved everything he has desired. In his journey many characters would join him both good and bad. The mysteries behind his birth would be slowly revealed so please be patient ^.^I hope you like the chapters I wrote so far. If you're a new reader and not sure about this novel then please give the first two chapters a try ^^ Thank you.
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Read 20 chaoters : The premise and concept of this novel is good and well written. The only thing I can't accept is the author's blatant use of words which are contradictory.1) He tells the 5 year kid is as mature as a youngster then that means he should be as matured as an adult when he turns 10.But the author writes that Belle and MC plays around when she visits him.๐คฏ. Does this mean they are doing some adult stuff playing ?? They should compete with each other to check their progress as Belle is too competitive as said by author but nope they play around.2) Dragon in this world lays very small eggs and two dragons come out of a single egg as they are twin and they simply bond with each of the MC and Belle.THICC Plot armor.3) The author does not know about cause and effect. He writes whatever he wishes and events happens without any cause and consequences.4) Nobody wanna kill/harm/kidnap MC. Only the dark alliance wants it and rest all wanna worship mc as god.5)He is as mature as a youngster but cant say no to Belle cause his Body is still a KID.6) Everything happens in favor of mc (THICC PLOT ARMOR).He is a happy go lucky naive kiddo with maturity.I hate reading story where everything is smoothsailing for mc who is naive idiotic but author keeps portraying him as intelligent and mature. This makes the story a FAIRY TALE and I have grown up from Fairy Tales.There is no suspense and thrill in reading fairytales. So If you like Fairytales this novel is for you. Alas its not for me.
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