Hello everyone, author here. I'd just like to say thank you for all the support. Honestly, the story just went from having a few readers to getting much more. I know full well that I may not be the idle author - some may like how I write and some may dislike it.
At the end of the day, it's your choice. I love writing too much to be bothered by that sort of thing. Honestly, it would not surprise me if majority of the readers get annoyed. I don't want to write something common and predictable. I want to write and love to write things that are harmonious and chaotic at the same time - that what I hope for at least. As I've said before, I'm unorthodox and a bit nuts in the head.[Sorry about that] ;p
Only thing I want is constructive criticism, things that will make me better and hopefully the story as-well. Or just post about the things that you didn't like/ obvious errors and such. I read every comment you guys post, go ahead and flame me for that matter, I'll filter out the good from the bad and hopefully make something even better for you guys instead.
P.S: I've gone back and slowly begun rewriting the previous chapters; bear with me and hopefully one day, we can all laugh about this
journey. (Shout out to the people who were here from the beginning, I love you all and promise to become better.)
Eh? Why is everyone giving this novel and author bad reviews? Indeed this may not suit some readers and maybe the quality is bad but I can gradually see it improving itself.
I like the confidence and braveness the author has to continue writing despite the reviews with 1-2 stars may discourage him.
Its pretty rough at the beginning but slowly goes with the flow as you continue further so do give it some patience. Give this author a chance to prove the novel's worth!
I can confidently say that I have a pretty good understanding of the book at this point as I have read all 500 current chapters and the author has continued to improve over time and doesn't progress the book too fast nor too slow. The story is great for those that want something a little different from what is common and if you want something with an intelligent but not cocky MC
It's a good read, it starts off a bit rough but quickly improves and soon became one of my favorite novels at the moment. MC is pretty much a stone cold killer at times, but also can play a loving father. As an aside, the world has an interesting mix of technology and magic, or more importantly technology fueled by magic such as cars which take magic energy as fuel instead of gasoline or some alternative liquid fuel.
The MC is very stupid, being the Heir to the God of death but doesn't train in any of Death's ability even though Death gave him advice on how to become stronger. He then goes and waste time raising a baby instead of training. So he wasn't able to save his hometown from getting destroyed and ends up dead and turned into stone by the princess. Story would have gone better if he went and trained with the God of Death after he died from the princess curse then return.
I read until the first 15 chapters cause i couldn‘t handle it anymore. The writing is all over the place. Much happens but you can only really understand some parts cause the situations aren‘t really well explained. New progress to the story isn‘t slowly introduced but as a reader you just get thrown into it.
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In my opinion the idea of the story is great and has a very good potential. The only part thats bugs me is the writing style or the absence of any good structure in the chapters. The chapters only have a really rough structure like Beginning -> Action -> End of situation.
Adding introductions or background information for new appearing characters or any real introduction for the story would probably be a good idea. There are almost no descriptions so the Tempo of the story is far to fast to get into it. And if there are descriptions they are all over the place and not really good integrated.
As a reader I get the feeling that the beginning of the story is just written down without further thinking to get it to a point where the real plot should start.
So I‘m dropping it since if I can‘t get into the beginning of the story there won‘t be a chance for the rest of the story.
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At the end of the day, it's your choice. I love writing too much to be bothered by that sort of thing. Honestly, it would not surprise me if majority of the readers get annoyed. I don't want to write something common and predictable. I want to write and love to write things that are harmonious and chaotic at the same time - that what I hope for at least. As I've said before, I'm unorthodox and a bit nuts in the head.[Sorry about that] ;p
Only thing I want is constructive criticism, things that will make me better and hopefully the story as-well. Or just post about the things that you didn't like/ obvious errors and such. I read every comment you guys post, go ahead and flame me for that matter, I'll filter out the good from the bad and hopefully make something even better for you guys instead.
P.S: I've gone back and slowly begun rewriting the previous chapters; bear with me and hopefully one day, we can all laugh about this
journey. (Shout out to the people who were here from the beginning, I love you all and promise to become better.)
I like the confidence and braveness the author has to continue writing despite the reviews with 1-2 stars may discourage him.
Its pretty rough at the beginning but slowly goes with the flow as you continue further so do give it some patience. Give this author a chance to prove the novel's worth!
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In my opinion the idea of the story is great and has a very good potential. The only part thats bugs me is the writing style or the absence of any good structure in the chapters. The chapters only have a really rough structure like Beginning -> Action -> End of situation.
Adding introductions or background information for new appearing characters or any real introduction for the story would probably be a good idea. There are almost no descriptions so the Tempo of the story is far to fast to get into it. And if there are descriptions they are all over the place and not really good integrated.
As a reader I get the feeling that the beginning of the story is just written down without further thinking to get it to a point where the real plot should start.
So I‘m dropping it since if I can‘t get into the beginning of the story there won‘t be a chance for the rest of the story.