I like the book But im mad at the author for the direction of how the book is going. i also like how renee is a very good mom and that she would do anything to protect christian.
I’ll see how this series is………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..
It’s amazing!! The character development and the pace of the story are very good. The story in itself is incredible. A few grammar errors here and there but otherwise it’s one of my favorite stories rn. Keep it up Author-san!!
Nice Book Name, Nice Book Cover.Great plot, nice character. Everything about the book is good except for one thing. Your grammar! the poor grammar usage will make your book lose its potential. If you find it hard, use Grammarly. It'll help you a lot, another piece of advice, read books, don't just focus on writing, read more so you will have to compare their writing skills to yours, that way you'll know where you are lacking behind and then correct yourself.Good luck with your writing.
Don't make a novel about a vampire if he's not going to act like a vampire.Within the first 19 chapters he already obtained the ability to withstand sunlight and gains the same disposition [skin type] as humans.Another thing is that it all seems too easy for him. He literally starts off finding high-tier chests easily inside the Count's mansion, and later on they all become super convenient ways of strengthening himself or giving him exactly what he needs in his situation. Overall, if you wanna see a vampire act like a human and get protected by "legitimate" plot armor in the form of treasure chests then you'll like this.
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