The Way-The World Stuck in Dimensional Transition

" Yes, dad. I already called them and cross checked everything " He raised his eyebrow when I stood before him.

"Hmm...who were those people then, Takuya?" Irina had a cute interrogation face on as she scrutinized my face for answers. She squeezed my hand, trying to seem threatening but it only made me laugh and her pout.

This novel is interesting. The writing quality could improve but it doesn’t bother me too much. The story development hasn’t really gone anywhere as of yet but it’s only been six chapters. The character design is interesting, the world building isn’t different but that’s because it’s the real world. Overall this book has room for improvement and I’d suggest grammerly for little mistakes though it’s a very good read😊

Until You’re Mine' is a good read. The story has some nice twists, and the emotions feel real enough to keep you interested.                           

I absolutely love it!! Perfect!! Keep up the good work....... I can't wait to read more chapters..... So creative and fantastic!! I hope Moulin eventually show his ability in front of everyone,  and I'm so excited to know their shocks and reactions 😆😆😆💖💖💖👏👏👏👍👍👍👍