✅Logical school life✅Good vampire progression✅Interesting npcs❌Short chapters (Author has other novels to write so its understandable.)❌Ability system (Author didn't reveal much about it so I won't complain for now.)❌MC couldn't accept his godsend power (Honestly I think his ignorance about him being a vampire after system told with so many ways is a little forced by the author. Well come on.. He doesn't live in cave and hunt mammoths for living every teenager has some fantasies about vampires theese days but of course he may think drinking blood for living is gross so I won't complain about it too.)Overall it's a good read.
I must say your writing style deviated from the common practice (using Author's Note a bit too much, and the dialogues are done differently). It takes a tremendous amount of time for people to shift their preferences, so be warned. overall, the story is good.
it is a really good novel I got hooked into it pretty quick even more so since it has great story development and lots of potential with the way it is going so far I highly suggest your reading it
I still hope u complete your last novel "greed" but this is a great concept nevertheless I hope to see some great stuff from this :DKeep the good stuff up :3
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