The Way Of Evolution

A very fun and enjoyable read. It's a very unique take on reincarnation that I havent seen before. I wont say much to avoid spoilers, but I can guarentee u that u will love the story. The grammer is fine, character development is great and I have to yet find a boring chapter.

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Review at ch 69The best part of this novel is the segs scenes, which are really hot and well writtenVery descriptive The writing is good but it's easy to see that the author doesn't have much experience with World building and character designIt's more like a wish fullfilmemtThe main women have a similar design with no unique character... It's more like they are a better fyc.k compared to other womenNothing specialThere is a sob story with each FMC and the MC gets 'over' emotionalBasically it's not relatable All the villains and mobs are horni and wants to Fyc.k the FMCOverall. .. This can't be considered as a novel but a segs storyDon't get me wrong, I'm not against it but I love it@Author you need to give the characters more depth and the females need to have more personalityThis would improve the quality of this work by a lot

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping the lengths of your chapters from 1k-2k words each due to that being what's most liked on this site, though the story isn't lacking in my mind, I feel that the first 5 chapters are likely a bit on the short side. Also, for the last two chapters you have gaps of time that you did not explain to us that you would have ahead of time, this will reduce your score in stability of updates, I suggest you try to keep updates more regular, or to let us know what we should expect as far as when new updates will occur. Positive feedback: You had stable updates for all but the last two chapters, and you did well in all other arias of this novel... keep up the good work.;,;.Personal Feedback: I will continue to read this novel at a later date.;,;.Score: WQ&SoU 4/5 SD,CD,&WB 5/5

When Blue woke up again she found herself locked in a dungoen.

"Well if I wasn't here you could have killed a lot of people in this market due to your power. Then you would have been killed due to this. However, I'm not going to force you. What is your name."

("Is he speaking French?") Gina wondered, though she did heard Paylor talk in the language a while ago.

"Wakaranai. (Aku tidak tahu)"