The Veilspire Willow

Found your link on Twitter since and since I like to check out new material for my YouTube channel that I am working on, I wanted to check this out.Not too bad so far man, just keep things slow and steady.  I cant express to you how mad it makes me when someone is writing a great story, then BOOM they get impatient with the pacing and make their MC go from weak to extremely OP.  PLEASE do NOT do that, and I think you will have a great piece of literature on your hands.  Best of luck, ill be keeping tabs on this!