I don't like typical chinese cultivation,, but this story is rather interesting so i will let it off, but there is no character development though (everyone seems like a robot,[I specially hate that lily])
slow updates and chapters too short, other than that a good concept but the characters feel too unnatural like in this 2 last chapters the "Boss" accepted the "SYSTEM" way too easily (I'M NOT NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER SO PLEASE PARDON MY MISTAKES)
Hello, Author here, This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.
Great novel, has high potential and isn't as predictable as many others of it's genre are. A joy to read and is very entertaining.
I would like to request the author to post more often, not twice everyday but maybe a extra chapter if the novel gets over 50 votes in a week. (Yes I just want more chapters. Fight me.)
There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.
Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zub
I know that some people hate it when authors rate their books. I made this review just to share the discord. I will delete this comment after a week or so just so it doesn't get on the nerves of the people who hate it when authors rate their books more than once.
I really enjoyed reading this novel. It had an amazing story line! But, please update it more than one chapter a day. I can’t get enough. Him becoming richer really made me happy since what he’s been through.
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I would like to request the author to post more often, not twice everyday but maybe a extra chapter if the novel gets over 50 votes in a week. (Yes I just want more chapters. Fight me.)
Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zub
I know that some people hate it when authors rate their books. I made this review just to share the discord. I will delete this comment after a week or so just so it doesn't get on the nerves of the people who hate it when authors rate their books more than once.